Yet another piece for my multi genre paper. It's a story about HTML5. Read and find out what it is. Any feedback is fine.
One fine day in Silicon Valley, California, Mr. Steve Jobs, an Executive in the Apple Computer Company, and some people from Google and Adobe met about this new fangled thing they came up with called HTML5. Mr. Jobs said that it was great for mobile devices, like their iPhone. Adobe, who is notorious for their problem ridden plugins, said that HTML5 doesnt require plugins. Google said that they are trying it out on Youtube. Jobs said, "Well, I asked Bill Gates to come to, but him and I can't agree on anything. He's so mean to me. The phone rang. It was the W3C. They told the team that they would now officially support the creation of HTML5, even though it was only supposed to go to HTML4. Everyone cheered. The door flew open. In walked the one and only Bill Gates. "Hey guys!" he yelled. "Late as usual," whispered Mr. Jobs to Vint Cerf. "Hey Mac guy," Said Gates, "is it cool if i support this HTML5 thing on Internet Explorer?" "That would be great" said Jobs. The former foes shook hands and the the world stopped turning for a second and people everywhere gasped, because Steve Jobs and Bill Gates were agreeing on something and working together.
Good job on this! I liked how you started it. I was a little confused during the middle. Over all it was good!
ReplyDeleteIt is very different and I like that. I like the whole story theme of it and it really brings people into the story. Good idea!
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